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                                    A Mr. Right& Partner Wanted Here
    To be honest, the exact reason why I write this note for a Mr Right& Partner here is also beyond my reasonable understanding. Though trust on Internet is at risk for all, this time I summon up all my courage to believe in miracle that there is such one Mr. Right& Partner existing in this unreal world.

            A brief introduction about this 25-year-old girl. Doris here is a girl of books, sports and peaceful habits. Detail information as following:
    A.Born in Henan Province, Doris work at Shenzhen as a foreign sales assistant now, planning to be foreign sales in this year. Her major is English and second foreign language is Japanese.

    Good news is that she passed TEM8 and fell in love with English ever since. She enjoyed the feeling of speaking with foreigners in English and expressed herself in other languages. Therefore, spoken English is part of her life.
       
    Besides, the continuation of Japanese study after graduation makes her more and more confident and interested in Japanese so that she finally decide to take the 2nd level examination on Japanese on 6th,July 2014.Now she is making preparation for it though confidence in passing it the first time remains little.

    B.Hobby: Travelling or soul, either is on the way. For this girl, two main hobbies almost occupy all her spare time----reading and sports.

    1.For reading, books mainly on philosophy, psychology, and literature either in original English edition or traditional Chinese version. The Red and The Black is the first English novel I read when I was a sophomore in Colleage, then I become fascinated on original English novels for translated versions sometimes narrow one’s imagination on the sceneries and limit one’s interpretation on the meaning of the novels. Then, followed my favorite novels---Tess. Sister Carri., Mediation. On the way. Moon Stone .now, Vanity Fair is on the Way. impressive Chinese- version novels--<人生>by 路遥;《面包树上的女人》by 张小娴;《围城》by 钱钟书;《缓慢》&《生命不能承受之轻》by 昆德拉;……now《追忆似水年华》is on the way.
    Reading purifies one’s mind and extends one’s life experience as well as matures one’s thought at different stage of life. It is worthwhile to spend some time on these great minds’ masterpieces for one will never know what will come to the hero or heroine’s life until the turning point and the end appear. Actually, in modern society , nearly every one gains an access to Hi-tech, but fewer and fewer people can calm themselves down and concentrate on reading because more and more chattingcommunication tools such as SKYPE,QQ, WECHAT catch their eyes or illusory Internet games kill most of their time. If people just entertain themselves by chatting tools and games, that is acceptable. But so many youths should become addicted to them, that is a pity and to some extent, it is a waste of life from my point of view.      
    2.For sports, I am a little good at Table Tennis and also fond of bad minton, basketball, volleyball. In addition, I usually climb mountains on weekends and do jogging at weekdays.
    Sports maintains one’s good health and relieves one’s pressure from daily life. I just enjoy the feeling of standing on the top of mountains, beautiful natural scenes being in my reach. Also, after long-time jogging, running or playing table tennis, sweat brings bad mood away and calls back refreshment to life. These are the reasons why I take a fancy on sports wherever I am. Just as a motto goes ”enjoy life whatever it is. ”

    C.Above A&B may enables you gain a brief impression on me: Optimistic , outgoing and easily go on well with. Definitely, that is my nature and I am a girl always willing to learn something new and ready to meet challenges in future life.
    Here is my future plan for next 20 years:
    a.Job:  foreign sales assistant →→foreign sales→→translator& interpreter (maybe after 35 years old). It may change according to different situation.
    b.Family: have a family built around 29 years old, a baby ,a husband and me. A family of three.
    c.Education: before 35 years old, I plan to return to university to finish postgraduate certificate on literature or other practical subjects based on actual need and interest in future. Foreign universities especially in USA&Japan are my first priority if money and time permitted.
    d.Travelling: in domestic places of interest, the Summer Palace, Great Wall, 九寨溝,麗江古城,蘇州,台灣日月潭…….and so on. Foreign countries:America , Japan, England and, France…….and so on. Beforemarriage, USA& Japan are the two main countries I most desire to go either for work or travelling. Now, I am doing my best to earn money for both travelling and studying aboard. Do not worry about your English or Japanese, I will be your translator when we are in these countries.

    Thank you for your kind patience in finishing reading above long introduction.

    That’s almost all about me. During college life, most of time is spent on study, library, sports and therefore I have not found a right one. until now, near 2 years after graduation, I still did not find the suitable person who suits me in both habits and future plan. I know one can not just wait for happiness to come, but come to pursue happiness in his or her own way.

    For you, Mr. Right& Partner I do not request too much. I am 159cm tall with average appearance. I really hope you can be at least 170cm though I do not care that much on your outer appearance. Kind, gentle, honest and ambitious. Just around 50% hobbies ,interest or future plans are same or similar with me. Plan to work in south of China, Shenzhen, Guangzhou will be my preference. Not too younger than me. 2-3 years older will be my preference. Like doing sports and wish to go aboard. Have your own pursuit and interest as well.

    If you are the one, please contact me and send me a brief introduction on you to the E-mail :710273006@qq.com or join My QQ. Looking forward to hearing from you the Mr Right in somewhere and hope you are really the one I am looking for.Thanks.


                                                                                                                               Doris
                                                                                                                                     2014.06.02

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    来围观 才女一枚 鉴定完毕

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    很耐心地读完了整篇文章,很有层次,语言也很精炼,看出作者能力很强。有个小小的问题,文章前半部分是在介绍作者自己,用第三人称来描述客户存在的,而后半部分,作者改为第一人称叙述,个人认为还是与前面部分保持一致比较好。
    另外,作者很厉害,气场肯定很强,要是我,肯定不敢高攀的,与这么强的女生在一起,压力山大。。。

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    大音希声

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    楼主很强大,真心佩服

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    支持!!!
    现在的女孩子就应该是这样的

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    Already add u, but I just would like to chat with you.

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    lz,你可以教我怎么学好英语吗

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    看完了!很棒的女生!大家快来抢啊

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    楼主很多地方!很值得我们学习, 我也该停下来,好好规划一下未来了

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    great and good job

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    太厉害了,可惜我沉淀不下来

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    月亮宝石,我只看了一半楼主很强大

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    小堂

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    这文章写得,杠杠滴!

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    少将留情

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    我能说我是靠着翻译软件才懵懵懂懂的看完吗?不可以~我不能暴露我英语Poor  的厉害!

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    Good introduction, Doris,  看完了,感觉在看作文。he will find you and come to you.

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    有挑战  我欣赏...

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    楼主真厉害

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    楼主,赐我们学英语秘籍吧



  •                                 A Mr. Right& Partner Wanted Here
    To be honest, the exact reason why I write this note for a Mr Right& Partner here is also beyond my reasonable understanding. Though trust on Internet is at risk for all, this time I summon up all my courage to believe in miracle that there is such one Mr. Right& Partner existing in this unreal world.

            A brief introduction about this 25-year-old girl. Doris here is a girl of books, sports and peaceful habits. Detail information as following:
    A.Born in Henan Province, Doris work at Shenzhen as a foreign sales assistant now, planning to be foreign sales in this year. Her major is English and second foreign language is Japanese.

    Good news is that she passed TEM8 and fell in love with English ever since. She enjoyed the feeling of speaking with foreigners in English and expressed herself in other languages. Therefore, spoken English is part of her life.
       
    Besides, the continuation of Japanese study after graduation makes her more and more confident and interested in Japanese so that she finally decide to take the 2nd level examination on Japanese on 6th,July 2014.Now she is making preparation for it though confidence in passing it the first time remains little.

    B.Hobby: Travelling or soul, either is on the way. For this girl, two main hobbies almost occupy all her spare time----reading and sports.

    1.For reading, books mainly on philosophy, psychology, and literature either in original English edition or traditional Chinese version. The Red and The Black is the first English novel I read when I was a sophomore in Colleage, then I become fascinated on original English novels for translated versions sometimes narrow one’s imagination on the sceneries and limit one’s interpretation on the meaning of the novels. Then, followed my favorite novels---Tess. Sister Carri., Mediation. On the way. Moon Stone .now, Vanity Fair is on the Way. impressive Chinese- version novels--<人生>by 路遥;《面包树上的女人》by 张小娴;《围城》by 钱钟书;《缓慢》&《生命不能承受之轻》by 昆德拉;……now《追忆似水年华》is on the way.
    Reading purifies one’s mind and extends one’s life experience as well as matures one’s thought at different stage of life. It is worthwhile to spend some time on these great minds’ masterpieces for one will never know what will come to the hero or heroine’s life until the turning point and the end appear. Actually, in modern society , nearly every one gains an access to Hi-tech, but fewer and fewer people can calm themselves down and concentrate on reading because more and more chattingcommunication tools such as SKYPE,QQ, WECHAT catch their eyes or illusory Internet games kill most of their time. If people just entertain themselves by chatting tools and games, that is acceptable. But so many youths should become addicted to them, that is a pity and to some extent, it is a waste of life from my point of view.      
    2.For sports, I am a little good at Table Tennis and also fond of bad minton, basketball, volleyball. In addition, I usually climb mountains on weekends and do jogging at weekdays.
    Sports maintains one’s good health and relieves one’s pressure from daily life. I just enjoy the feeling of standing on the top of mountains, beautiful natural scenes being in my reach. Also, after long-time jogging, running or playing table tennis, sweat brings bad mood away and calls back refreshment to life. These are the reasons why I take a fancy on sports wherever I am. Just as a motto goes ”enjoy life whatever it is. ”

    C.Above A&B may enables you gain a brief impression on me: Optimistic , outgoing and easily go on well with. Definitely, that is my nature and I am a girl always willing to learn something new and ready to meet challenges in future life.
    Here is my future plan for next 20 years:
    a.Job:  foreign sales assistant →→foreign sales→→translator& interpreter (maybe after 35 years old). It may change according to different situation.
    b.Family: have a family built around 29 years old, a baby ,a husband and me. A family of three.
    c.Education: before 35 years old, I plan to return to university to finish postgraduate certificate on literature or other practical subjects based on actual need and interest in future. Foreign universities especially in USA&Japan are my first priority if money and time permitted.
    d.Travelling: in domestic places of interest, the Summer Palace, Great Wall, 九寨溝,麗江古城,蘇州,台灣日月潭…….and so on. Foreign countries:America , Japan, England and, France…….and so on. Beforemarriage, USA& Japan are the two main countries I most desire to go either for work or travelling. Now, I am doing my best to earn money for both travelling and studying aboard. Do not worry about your English or Japanese, I will be your translator when we are in these countries.

    Thank you for your kind patience in finishing reading above long introduction.

    That’s almost all about me. During college life, most of time is spent on study, library, sports and therefore I have not found a right one. until now, near 2 years after graduation, I still did not find the suitable person who suits me in both habits and future plan. I know one can not just wait for happiness to come, but come to pursue happiness in his or her own way.

    For you, Mr. Right& Partner I do not request too much. I am 159cm tall with average appearance. I really hope you can be at least 170cm though I do not care that much on your outer appearance. Kind, gentle, honest and ambitious. Just around 50% hobbies ,interest or future plans are same or similar with me. Plan to work in south of China, Shenzhen, Guangzhou will be my preference. Not too younger than me. 2-3 years older will be my preference. Like doing sports and wish to go aboard. Have your own pursuit and interest as well.

    If you are the one, please contact me and send me a brief introduction on you to the E-mail :710273006@qq.com or join My QQ. Looking forward to hearing from you the Mr Right in somewhere and hope you are really the one I am looking for.Thanks.


                                                                                                                               Doris
                                                                                                                                     2014.06.02



  • 来围观 才女一枚 鉴定完毕



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  • 很耐心地读完了整篇文章,很有层次,语言也很精炼,看出作者能力很强。有个小小的问题,文章前半部分是在介绍作者自己,用第三人称来描述客户存在的,而后半部分,作者改为第一人称叙述,个人认为还是与前面部分保持一致比较好。
    另外,作者很厉害,气场肯定很强,要是我,肯定不敢高攀的,与这么强的女生在一起,压力山大。。。



  • 楼主很强大,真心佩服



  • 支持!!!
    现在的女孩子就应该是这样的



  • Already add u, but I just would like to chat with you.



  • lz,你可以教我怎么学好英语吗



  • 看完了!很棒的女生!大家快来抢啊



  • 楼主很多地方!很值得我们学习, 我也该停下来,好好规划一下未来了



  • great and good job



  • 太厉害了,可惜我沉淀不下来



  • 月亮宝石,我只看了一半楼主很强大



  • 这文章写得,杠杠滴!



  • 我能说我是靠着翻译软件才懵懵懂懂的看完吗?不可以~我不能暴露我英语Poor  的厉害!



  • Good introduction, Doris,  看完了,感觉在看作文。he will find you and come to you.



  • 有挑战  我欣赏...



  • 楼主真厉害



  • 楼主,赐我们学英语秘籍吧


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