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    我也想求教啊,今年刚毕业进外贸的女汉子,求指教,能有联系方式给我吗?星星眼jpg.

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    怎么没更新啦

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    I like you

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    hahaaa, nice huh?  you cheated us...

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    楼主修改得确实不错,原著句式复杂,要是放在作文中就不错,但有Chinese 的味道和语法的BUG.

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    talbag:修改N多次的最终版,麻烦楼主斧正斧正~~~~~
    Hi~ Dear  !
                Good day ~  
                   This XXXXXXXXXXXX in Shenzhen ,China. ...
    回到原帖
    Hi~ Dear  !
               Good day ~  
                  This XXXXXXXXXXXX in Shenzhen ,China.
                  Our career started 15 years ago and 10-years-running in alibaba.
                 We are SEDEX 4 and L'oreal Audit manufacturer.
                 We specialize in varies bags ,cosmetic bags,  backpacks, travel bags, wallets and so on.
                We have coopration with L'oreal, NIVEA, BOSS,ELIZABETH ARDEN, CLARINS,etc.
                  If any question,just call me ~



    妞,你这个排版真的不是故意的么……
    Hi~Dear! 你确定你是认真的吗?开发信好赖也算是正式的商务函电,所以你这个称呼要正式一些。Dear XX,
    This is XX from XX company in Shenzhen, China.
    偶尔用点从句,不要全部用主谓宾简单句哦。I I I 不行, We We We 也不行哦……
    As a SEDEX 4 and L'oreal Audit manufacturer, we have been engaged in XX field for 15 years and run 10 years on alibaba.
    In past years, our XX product winned  the hearts of costomers like L'oreal, NIVEA, BOSS,ELIZABETH ARDEN, CLARINS, etc.
    We also hope to provide packaging solutions for your company. Contact me, let's talk more about our cooperation.
    Regards,
    XX


    仅供参考~

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    hk1510882829:Hi,

    Well got your inquiry.

    The product you interested in is our ..., as a manufacturer with 20 years experience, we wo...
    回到原帖
    Hi,

    Well got your inquiry.

    The product you interested in is our ..., as a manufacturer with 20 years experience, we would like to provide them for you.

    In order to meet your demand well and to quote you a better price, would you like to provide us more details, such as size, material, movement, packing etc..

    If you use our design of this product, the price is about US$2/PC for 1,000pcs, of course, this is a negotiable price.  how do you think?

    And would you like to send me your website and product info for my record?
    thanks
    Rocky.

    这个是收到询盘之后的回复吧。
    Dear XX,
    Glad to get your inquiry. The product you are interested in is our main product. So you can get very good price as well as stable quality.
    The price is about US$2/PC based on 1,000pcs if you use our design, in order to give you most accurate price, could you provide us more details, such as size, material, movement, packing etc..
    Below is our XXproduct picture and website for your reference, hope we can cooperate soon.
    Regards,
    XX
    换位思考。写完一个邮件先换位思考。假如自己是客户。第一句就要抓住客户眼球。你好,你要的产品刚好是我们主要产品诶~然后报给他一个大概价格,然后告诉他你必须提供详细信息才能得到最精确的报价。第一封回盘先不要要客户网址什么的。先充分展示自己+询问客户详细规格。其实充分展示自己也是为了引起客户兴趣让他告诉我们详细规格

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    一只狂奔的猫

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    cn209759078:Chinese Supplier Of Outdoorwear Sportwear At Your Service
    Hi:
    This is Xiamen Yingjieli Garments co. Ltd. It is glad to...
    回到原帖
    Chinese Supplier Of Outdoorwear Sportwear At Your Service
    Hi:
    This is Xiamen Yingjieli Garments co. Ltd. It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relationship with you.
    We are a manufacturer and export of apparel. We’ve been doing outdoor jacket for more than 12 years,e.g.down jacket, windbreaker, ski jacket, softshell jacket, fleece jacket, skin jacket,  

    we have many strong apparel partner, like "*****"and so on. we are sure that we will satisfy your expectation.

    Our products had adopted ISO9001:2000 Quality System Authorities, quality is always the culture. If you are interested in finding a better supplier of outdoor sportwear. please don’t be hesitate to contact us. we will offer you our best competitive price.

    Web: http://www.xmtiannan.en.alibaba.com/productlist.html
    Any questions are welcome.
    Looking forward to your earliest reply.
    Sincerely Yours,
    Daniel Alves
    Email: dept1@qztn.com
    Skype:daniel__alves.  Wechat:qcy93628
    Whatsapp:+86 18850579094 (due to the time difference, I might not be able to connect with you immediately with Email, you can contact me with whatsapp in the first time)



    我的天,小伙伴儿,你的邮件真是好长。
    网址最好不要加。容易被判为垃圾邮件。
    邮件whhatsup 后边括号里那一串也不要写,显得很不专业。


    Dear XX,
    Good day, This is XX from XX company. As a 11 years manufacturer of XX, we have passed ISO9001:2000 Quality System Authorities.
    XX company have cooperation with us since XX years, it's really a nice coopertion.
    We wonder if you will also have interested to cooperate with us to get better product at better price.
    If so, contact us, let's talk more about details.
    Looking forword to our early cooperation.
    Regards,
    XX


    仅供参考, 一定要简洁。说明自己是谁,哪个公司的,做什么的,有什么优势即可,其他均可以砍去


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    好贴大家一起顶

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    学习了,真的厉害。

  • 71 楼#

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    求楼主指点:

    Hi,

    1. 12+ years of experience: Founded in 2004, specialize in R&D,Production of cables, chargers and digital accessaries.
    2. Supplier of Fortune 500 companies such as PHILIPS,SIEMENS,SANGFEI,SONY,mindray,Neusoft.
    3. Company owned property includes 25,000 square meters factory, 600 square meters R&D office.
    4. All products are certified by USB-IF to meet all electrical, mechanical, and environmental standards.
    5. MOQ is flexible, OEM/ODM are welcomed. We are highly responsive to our customers needs.

    Attachment are some of our best selling products for your reference. Welcome for OEM/ODM. Free samples available.
    Contact me for more information.

    Best regards,

    Emma

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    aonicamera

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    cn1518260187izxu:求楼主指点:

    Hi,

    1. 12+ years of experience: Founded in 2004, specialize in R&D,Production of cables, chargers and digital a...
    回到原帖
    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips, Siemens and Sony have been our premium clients for over xx years.
    Please take a look at our catalogue attached to this email, and if there are any items that interest you, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you.

    Yours sincerely,
    xx

    个人意见哈, 刚开始不用把公司信息写这么清楚,客户也没时间看文字很多的。简单点,把重要的都写到, 他如果有兴趣自然会问你进一步的信息(包括公司, 工厂,证书等)

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    71楼

    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips, Siemens and Sony have been our premium clients for over xx years.
    Please take a look at our catalogue attached to this email, and if there are any items that interest you, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you.

    Yours sincerely,
    xx

    个人意见哈, 刚开始不用把公司信息写这么清楚,客户也没时间看文字很多的。简单点,把重要的都写到, 他如果有兴趣自然会问你进一步的信息(包括公司, 工厂,证书等)

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    aonicamera:71楼

    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips,...
    回到原帖
    万分感谢!

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    看过后很有帮助呐,怎么收藏帖子呀,新手。。不知道怎么收藏

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    Dear xxx,  
    Good morning!
    As you are expanding your collection of premium, contemporary aluminium windows and doors products, you might be looking for reliable supplier. I am confident that   xxx   Co.,Ltd is one that may suit you. We are proud to supply premium, aluminium windows and doors with stylish designs to upscale aluminium windows and doors distributors for more than 18 years.
    Why you can rely on us for quality aluminium windows and doors? We have following qualifications:
    -A talented in-house design team releasing original designs .
    -Passed ISO9001:2015 quality system;
    -Abundant experience serving Emerging market.
    -Working with us, you can lower your cost for premium aluminium windows and doors, as we are factory and have the management of scale.
    Attached please find our latest product picture for your reference.
    What aluminium windows and doors models you are currently selling? Do you mind to send me detailed size and glass requirements to us to estimate?
           Our hope is to establish mutual beneficial trading relations between us.It’d be much appreciate that you can add my WhatsApp(+86 xxxxxxxxx) or call me back for any doubt and clarification.
           Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     
    Best regards,





    帮我修改下 谢谢。

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    cn1511301109:楼主被撩了,鉴定完毕。回到原帖
    同感

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    cn1518264907fjcj:Dear xxx,  
    Good morning!
    As you are expanding your collection of premium, contemporary aluminium windows and doors p...
    回到原帖
    Dear xxx,
    Good morning.
    How are you? I hope all is well. We are the supplier of XXX(举个在你们行业有名的公司,适当吹下牛OK吧)and have continuously exported aluminium windows and doors to your country for a long time.
    Please find the catalogue attached to this email and if there are any designs that interest you, let me know, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you. Looking forward to your reply.


    Best regards,
    这里写你的名字,联系方式,公司等


    个人觉得首次发开发信应该少写问句,客户看到这么问句应该也会是黑人问号吧,哈哈,个人建议哈,改得不好请见谅。

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    cn1500054766:我想说我英语四级都没过。刚毕业,是不是不适合这条路。我是国商专业的回到原帖
    国商专业



  • 我也想求教啊,今年刚毕业进外贸的女汉子,求指教,能有联系方式给我吗?星星眼jpg.



  • 怎么没更新啦



  • I like you



  • hahaaa, nice huh?  you cheated us...



  • 楼主修改得确实不错,原著句式复杂,要是放在作文中就不错,但有Chinese 的味道和语法的BUG.



  • talbag:修改N多次的最终版,麻烦楼主斧正斧正~~~~~
    Hi~ Dear  !
                Good day ~  
                   This XXXXXXXXXXXX in Shenzhen ,China. ...
    回到原帖
    Hi~ Dear  !
               Good day ~  
                  This XXXXXXXXXXXX in Shenzhen ,China.
                  Our career started 15 years ago and 10-years-running in alibaba.
                 We are SEDEX 4 and L'oreal Audit manufacturer.
                 We specialize in varies bags ,cosmetic bags,  backpacks, travel bags, wallets and so on.
                We have coopration with L'oreal, NIVEA, BOSS,ELIZABETH ARDEN, CLARINS,etc.
                  If any question,just call me ~



    妞,你这个排版真的不是故意的么……
    Hi~Dear! 你确定你是认真的吗?开发信好赖也算是正式的商务函电,所以你这个称呼要正式一些。Dear XX,
    This is XX from XX company in Shenzhen, China.
    偶尔用点从句,不要全部用主谓宾简单句哦。I I I 不行, We We We 也不行哦……
    As a SEDEX 4 and L'oreal Audit manufacturer, we have been engaged in XX field for 15 years and run 10 years on alibaba.
    In past years, our XX product winned  the hearts of costomers like L'oreal, NIVEA, BOSS,ELIZABETH ARDEN, CLARINS, etc.
    We also hope to provide packaging solutions for your company. Contact me, let's talk more about our cooperation.
    Regards,
    XX


    仅供参考~



  • hk1510882829:Hi,

    Well got your inquiry.

    The product you interested in is our ..., as a manufacturer with 20 years experience, we wo...
    回到原帖
    Hi,

    Well got your inquiry.

    The product you interested in is our ..., as a manufacturer with 20 years experience, we would like to provide them for you.

    In order to meet your demand well and to quote you a better price, would you like to provide us more details, such as size, material, movement, packing etc..

    If you use our design of this product, the price is about US$2/PC for 1,000pcs, of course, this is a negotiable price.  how do you think?

    And would you like to send me your website and product info for my record?
    thanks
    Rocky.

    这个是收到询盘之后的回复吧。
    Dear XX,
    Glad to get your inquiry. The product you are interested in is our main product. So you can get very good price as well as stable quality.
    The price is about US$2/PC based on 1,000pcs if you use our design, in order to give you most accurate price, could you provide us more details, such as size, material, movement, packing etc..
    Below is our XXproduct picture and website for your reference, hope we can cooperate soon.
    Regards,
    XX
    换位思考。写完一个邮件先换位思考。假如自己是客户。第一句就要抓住客户眼球。你好,你要的产品刚好是我们主要产品诶~然后报给他一个大概价格,然后告诉他你必须提供详细信息才能得到最精确的报价。第一封回盘先不要要客户网址什么的。先充分展示自己+询问客户详细规格。其实充分展示自己也是为了引起客户兴趣让他告诉我们详细规格



  • cn209759078:Chinese Supplier Of Outdoorwear Sportwear At Your Service
    Hi:
    This is Xiamen Yingjieli Garments co. Ltd. It is glad to...
    回到原帖
    Chinese Supplier Of Outdoorwear Sportwear At Your Service
    Hi:
    This is Xiamen Yingjieli Garments co. Ltd. It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relationship with you.
    We are a manufacturer and export of apparel. We’ve been doing outdoor jacket for more than 12 years,e.g.down jacket, windbreaker, ski jacket, softshell jacket, fleece jacket, skin jacket,  

    we have many strong apparel partner, like "*****"and so on. we are sure that we will satisfy your expectation.

    Our products had adopted ISO9001:2000 Quality System Authorities, quality is always the culture. If you are interested in finding a better supplier of outdoor sportwear. please don’t be hesitate to contact us. we will offer you our best competitive price.

    Web: http://www.xmtiannan.en.alibaba.com/productlist.html
    Any questions are welcome.
    Looking forward to your earliest reply.
    Sincerely Yours,
    Daniel Alves
    Email: dept1@qztn.com
    Skype:daniel__alves.  Wechat:qcy93628
    Whatsapp:+86 18850579094 (due to the time difference, I might not be able to connect with you immediately with Email, you can contact me with whatsapp in the first time)



    我的天,小伙伴儿,你的邮件真是好长。
    网址最好不要加。容易被判为垃圾邮件。
    邮件whhatsup 后边括号里那一串也不要写,显得很不专业。


    Dear XX,
    Good day, This is XX from XX company. As a 11 years manufacturer of XX, we have passed ISO9001:2000 Quality System Authorities.
    XX company have cooperation with us since XX years, it's really a nice coopertion.
    We wonder if you will also have interested to cooperate with us to get better product at better price.
    If so, contact us, let's talk more about details.
    Looking forword to our early cooperation.
    Regards,
    XX


    仅供参考, 一定要简洁。说明自己是谁,哪个公司的,做什么的,有什么优势即可,其他均可以砍去







  • 好贴大家一起顶



  • 学习了,真的厉害。



  • 求楼主指点:

    Hi,

    1. 12+ years of experience: Founded in 2004, specialize in R&D,Production of cables, chargers and digital accessaries.
    2. Supplier of Fortune 500 companies such as PHILIPS,SIEMENS,SANGFEI,SONY,mindray,Neusoft.
    3. Company owned property includes 25,000 square meters factory, 600 square meters R&D office.
    4. All products are certified by USB-IF to meet all electrical, mechanical, and environmental standards.
    5. MOQ is flexible, OEM/ODM are welcomed. We are highly responsive to our customers needs.

    Attachment are some of our best selling products for your reference. Welcome for OEM/ODM. Free samples available.
    Contact me for more information.

    Best regards,

    Emma



  • cn1518260187izxu:求楼主指点:

    Hi,

    1. 12+ years of experience: Founded in 2004, specialize in R&D,Production of cables, chargers and digital a...
    回到原帖
    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips, Siemens and Sony have been our premium clients for over xx years.
    Please take a look at our catalogue attached to this email, and if there are any items that interest you, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you.

    Yours sincerely,
    xx

    个人意见哈, 刚开始不用把公司信息写这么清楚,客户也没时间看文字很多的。简单点,把重要的都写到, 他如果有兴趣自然会问你进一步的信息(包括公司, 工厂,证书等)



  • 71楼

    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips, Siemens and Sony have been our premium clients for over xx years.
    Please take a look at our catalogue attached to this email, and if there are any items that interest you, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you.

    Yours sincerely,
    xx

    个人意见哈, 刚开始不用把公司信息写这么清楚,客户也没时间看文字很多的。简单点,把重要的都写到, 他如果有兴趣自然会问你进一步的信息(包括公司, 工厂,证书等)



  • aonicamera:71楼

    Dear xx,

    Glad to write to you. We produced cables, chargers and digital accessaries to xxx market before. Philips,...
    回到原帖
    万分感谢!



  • 看过后很有帮助呐,怎么收藏帖子呀,新手。。不知道怎么收藏



  • Dear xxx,  
    Good morning!
    As you are expanding your collection of premium, contemporary aluminium windows and doors products, you might be looking for reliable supplier. I am confident that   xxx   Co.,Ltd is one that may suit you. We are proud to supply premium, aluminium windows and doors with stylish designs to upscale aluminium windows and doors distributors for more than 18 years.
    Why you can rely on us for quality aluminium windows and doors? We have following qualifications:
    -A talented in-house design team releasing original designs .
    -Passed ISO9001:2015 quality system;
    -Abundant experience serving Emerging market.
    -Working with us, you can lower your cost for premium aluminium windows and doors, as we are factory and have the management of scale.
    Attached please find our latest product picture for your reference.
    What aluminium windows and doors models you are currently selling? Do you mind to send me detailed size and glass requirements to us to estimate?
           Our hope is to establish mutual beneficial trading relations between us.It’d be much appreciate that you can add my WhatsApp(+86 xxxxxxxxx) or call me back for any doubt and clarification.
           Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
     
    Best regards,





    帮我修改下 谢谢。



  • cn1511301109:楼主被撩了,鉴定完毕。回到原帖
    同感



  • cn1518264907fjcj:Dear xxx,  
    Good morning!
    As you are expanding your collection of premium, contemporary aluminium windows and doors p...
    回到原帖
    Dear xxx,
    Good morning.
    How are you? I hope all is well. We are the supplier of XXX(举个在你们行业有名的公司,适当吹下牛OK吧)and have continuously exported aluminium windows and doors to your country for a long time.
    Please find the catalogue attached to this email and if there are any designs that interest you, let me know, I'll be pleased to make a quotation to you. Looking forward to your reply.


    Best regards,
    这里写你的名字,联系方式,公司等


    个人觉得首次发开发信应该少写问句,客户看到这么问句应该也会是黑人问号吧,哈哈,个人建议哈,改得不好请见谅。



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