楼主#更多 发布于：2016-08-23 09:15
续上一个故事，双方一直在拉锯是先让重验货还是先付钱。跳过一些细节，老外后来反脸了，直指D女士办事不力向她的老板K先生投诉了。单从business english 的角度，这一节的例子都写得专业，所以我就不作修改了。那么我们在一旁静静地看着他们装B吧。
I tried to call D’s phone but failed.
We relooked into the remittance of USDXXX
and found that we had accidently paid you too much. We had now stopped the
payment to recalculate. We will send through payment again after recalculation.
I wanted to discuss with Dora on the phone but it seems that you are avoiding
answering my phone calls.
We do not know what reason you could not
arrange our QC’s
inspection. There must be some quality issues otherwise you could have
arranged our QC to check the goods. We made 30% upfront payment on this product
based on the trust to your company. It is unfair that you do not follow our
instruction. As my discussion with my boss, we would rather not deliver the
skirts if there is going to have potential problem.
You must communicate with us ASAP as
tomorrow is the cutoff date for the skirts!
I would appreciate a phone call from you
as dealing with Dora on this matter has not been beneficial for either of us.
I will await your phone call,
That has make me so surprised and disappointment （建议大家多用surprise and disappointed这两个高雅地表达不满的字眼）when I saw YYY’s email. Pls take exactly
immediate action to push all thing come back the right way.
I am really appreciated for D has strictly complied with company's policy. And
pls clearly to be noted, all her previous and coming actions are under my
Here I would like to list the details again, even thought Dora has shown your
side for many times:
QC inspection for TCS:
All of us know well about Q, and they represent the authority in the field. The
end customer has enough confidence to them. I have been working together them
in the past several years, and really know well for all the procedure. So I
think that is no necessary from your side to doubt their QC report.
For make all things come back on the road, and show our strong willing to
continue the business I would like to show our procedure(we only accept this
solution at this moment):
We believe above solution is our final
accepting solution, and would not accept any future re-negotiation.
I would like to reiterate here, D has my all authority under handling this
issue. For any future connection pls contact with her directly.
I am really appreciated for D has strictly complied with company's policy这句话有点儿不对哟，应写成： I am really appreciated for D having strictly complied with company's policy.或者 I am really appreciated for D's strictly complying with company's policy.